Evaluation on my radio play. Performance

When we filmed our radio play I think it went well because our voices were clear and loud. We rehearsed before we was filmed. I think it went well and we didn't make any mistakes the second time we done it. We was reading from our scripts and using different voices for different characters. We also used sound effects. We could have used some music at the start or in between lines. We could have used background sounds and noises of the plane. If we could do it again I would change the voices of my characters more so you can really tell a difference between the different character I was playing. I would want to do more background noises and add background music. we worked well as a group because we have different voices and we worked on the script together. I think our script was good because it wasn't to long and the story was clear. Also it was good with the amount of people we had because if we had to many characters then the story line would of gone off track. The details of each character throughout the scene did stay in character unless you changed character. Most characters were worried, scared or afraid of what was going to happen.If we do our radio play again then we will have music at the start and at the end and we will do the music on logic pro. Also we could get different noises for the background such as the plane landing or taking off.

Me and James are going to talk in the trailer and Dennis is making the music for the start and finish of our radio play. Me and James listened to the music that he made on logic and told him what to improve on and what parts he should make longer which is repetition. We also told Dennis to make some of the tracks slow in some parts and then make it faster in some other tracks. It is only a short piece of introduction music just for the start and at the end of our radio play.